This is a poem which occured to me, on my way to office, the other day....
Feel free to suggest a title :)
Swinging with the wind,
Feeling my smile,
Counting my blessings…
I wonder…
Is this a pure bliss?
Regretting the past days,
Cursing my own conscious,
Fearing the days ahead…
I wonder…
Is this called life?
Seeing the unpredicted incidents,
Consoling myself that it is just a journey,
Gazing at this unending miracle…
I wonder…
Is this called world?
Walking in this world…
With a larger than life soul…
I pass the bliss, hurt, blame and jealous…
All I can wonder and say is…
Celebrate life…
You never know when it ends…
Muses, on Wheels..
ReplyDeleteFirst thing i got reminded of after reading this were the wordings 'when i get older, i will be stronger, they'll call me freedom, just like a waiving flag'..the feel after listening to the song as well as reading the poem is the same...more or less :)
http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=xhM-cpSwrmM
wow! thats one awesome title bro! I loved the "when i get older..." I am glad you found the after feel more or less the same :) (you made my day with that!)
ReplyDeleteSimply awesome n superb...
ReplyDeletejust too good!!!
Man u a Poet!!
Keep writin I say...
title??
Days..
Rewind then Forward
Who knew it?
@ Rak - Thanks a ton man :) as i said, i was super surprised and happy to see ur facebook promo of this poem!!!
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